Broken Strings - Comments

He was angry at himself - I love that. Because it's so true, when you can't think of anything to write. It's so frustrating.

As if it was the guitars fault - 'guitars' should have an apostrophe, because it's not a plural, it's a possesive noun.

"Fuck, Eric. What's your point?“ Ah God, that cracked me up. A lovely reaction, I thought.

Oh goodness. Every emotion he felt was conveyed so well, it felt so real. I loved the exchanges between Whiplasher and Eric, it was touching and it didn't seem too lame or too corny, you could really see their friendship coming through. I liked Eric's somewhat childish dialogue, it added a nice touch to his character and it made it easier to sympathise with him, I thought.

That was great. :)

I could really feel the emotion in this :) Very well written. You create such beautiful images in my head which makes it all very, very real. Your writing is close to, if not, perfect :) Good job!

First off, don't worry I haven't forgotten about you. I don't know if I'll read the other two things you wanted me to read tonight, but I will read them.

Anyways, this was good. The descriptions were really good and you could really get a sense of what Eric was feeling. I think you portrayed hysteria very well in this.

I noticed a few typos but that's the only negative comment I have about this. You wrote this really well.

Sorry it took so long for me to get around to judging. But this story is amazing! I truly love your writing style. *nods head* Very good, very good.

I give you second place.

^I agree with her^
bad Andy, I should tie...uh nevermind...

anyways this story was so great, it focused on something that people often point out about Cat, but it was done beautifully

ew, Kat. <3 I do love this story *_*

I guess I should joke now on Cat being such a hysteric boy but I'm just sad about it. I can so understand his feelings, feeling like being the one who does nothing really special and stuff.
And the more you try to do something special and phenomenous the more you fail which is a fucking devil's circle.
That's so evilish

But I don't understand Andy ;_; Why did he hit little Kitten for that? He should be there for him and not going away just like that :grr: *hits Andy really hard*
Evil, Andy, evil! :snob

But I love you style of writing <3 it creates such an awesome atmosphere <3