October 26th, 2009 at 04:23pm
If I Needed Someone - Comments
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Aww, our Georgie's a romantic!! He's got a lot of...stamina in this story doesn't he? (I blame John's influence entirely.) I love your style so much and you got his voice just right. *clapOctober 26th, 2009 at 04:03pm
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This is a really cool story, and it's a George story so it's awesome!
Hope you update soon :DOctober 24th, 2009 at 03:40am -
Yay!! :D
I agree with the comment above, i so hope George can find her and get to her. I wonder what he's gonna do to get her to stay...
Aw well his charm beauty wit and musical talents should be enough! lol
I found it very cute that she didn't really want to go to the club but ended up going anyway because of Georgie. :)
anyway I hope the evil creeper called "writers block" doesn't get its grasps on this story! :) its very intriguing luv so keep it up.October 13th, 2009 at 07:24am -
Eff-Yeah!
Thank god you updated this.I was beginning to wonder about it.And I hope to god George finds this hotel and gets Darlene before she leaves as well ;-; Cause,y'know,if he doesn't,then------I don't know what I'm gonna feel.But right now,I'm just hoping he gets to her.October 12th, 2009 at 11:54pm -
Yay a George Story!
and A good one at that. :)
You should update soon. I'm dying to know what happens.October 12th, 2009 at 05:47pm -
First sex scene i've read with George in it. And i loved it! Keep it up!
I could of swore i subbed but i never got any email updates. :( oh well i'll sub again.September 14th, 2009 at 03:42am -
Love this.
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George is my fave. BeatleSeptember 12th, 2009 at 11:01pm -
Tehehe. Since yougave me that awesome little sneak preview, I admit I kind of skimmed over it, but to read it again! I laughed my ass off with John and Paul.
See? No need to worry about getting their personalities across, you did excellent. I could totally picture John standing over George, squinting his eyes, and saying "I didn't piss in it, if that's what yer looking for." =D
And Paul! So cute, making him defend Georgie like that. I loved it!
And of course, John had to interrogate George about his one night stand with the blonde who had huge knockers.
So yeah, this chapter was definitely realistic.
And I am now dying with curiousity as why Darlene fled in such a hurry.September 11th, 2009 at 05:36pm -
' I didn't piss in it if that's what your thinking
I wouldn't put it past you.'
Rotfl! I can so see that! Vulgarity and innuendos over coffee that's our boys!September 11th, 2009 at 05:10pm -
awh georgie porgie has a little crush; how cute :)
I really liked John and Paul in this one, it was very real. I could totally see it.September 11th, 2009 at 02:54am -
Loved it.Poor georgie being strained out on the one night stand thing.But I can totally see John and Paul acting like that :)
I can't see where this story is going :) Keep it up,luv.September 11th, 2009 at 02:32am -
loving it! nice sex scene by the way xD
**Subscribes**September 11th, 2009 at 02:17am -
Definitely subscribing to this mass of beauty here.August 25th, 2009 at 12:33am
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Oh hell yes, welcome back, baby.:tehe: I couldn't be more proud of that sex if I had written it myself.August 22nd, 2009 at 05:10am
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Yeah so George had definately lost his virginity already.. I personally dont think I've ever read a story that had George and rough, drunk, passionate sex in the same scene. Whoa. And your author's note: LMFAO bahahahah.August 21st, 2009 at 09:43pm
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They fucked. Oh George .... you just have to be so damn sexy in your lankiness. Can I be Darlene? Rofl. Good porn scene here Missy! See, with a little practise, you can speak Porn fluently as well. Welcome to the club!. Drunk, passionate sex is always a thrill to write, innit?August 21st, 2009 at 07:38pm
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ah im getting to hang of this. haha. k so as i said i don't think its a lame start. Its nice to see a George story. most are john ones. So next ch. she attacks him and demands a sexy dance!! LOL JK.July 24th, 2009 at 09:49am
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I think that this beginning was rather cute. I'm glad there's a George story. And I just love it being Hamburg. Could be a bit awkward unless hes already lost his virginity there lmfao.July 24th, 2009 at 02:51am
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:mrgreen: Grrr, Idk why it didn't post. Anywho, here's my second attempt.
I absolutely love your writing style. -tries to steal but fails- >.> Oh well, maybe next time. hahaha You know, Darlene sounds like the cheeky one herself! George is a cutie. XD I'm also loving the Hamburg setting. More pleases! Or shall I have to hitch-hike over to Michigan and lay a death threat on you?July 23rd, 2009 at 09:20pm
I'm so glad you finally updated this little masterpiece here!
You must know, that as of yet, you are the only brave one to write out George.
So yeah, I'm really happy that they found each other. Or rather, that George managed to track Darlene down. Wow, things between them sure are going full-speed. o_o
I love your writing style, I don't know if I've told you this enough.
Egh, I keep going back and forth between commenting and trying to get rid of this annoying person on msn.
Sara ... update this. Please.
Omfg LMFAO! I love what Karma said! He's got a lot of ... stamina in this story, does't he? (I blame John's influence entirely.) XDDD
I didn't see that she had already written that when I commented on George's stamina.
I guess we're all thinking the same thing here.