Well, first off, I'm not sure if this was intention, but Guardian, the word I think you were aiming for, has a "u". There were a few proof reading errors here and there, but that's okay, because I still really liked it. I like your style of writing and the way you incorporated the purple flats into a bigger plot. The results for the contest will be up August 15th! Good luck!
I love you darling! It was great. :] Hope you win.
<3
Cloudia