Not registered?
Create an account
Username or Email
Password
Remember me
Forgotten password
Homepage
Stories
Poems
Magazine
Articles
Reviews
Tutorials
Books
Members
Blogs
Forums
Read
Info
Comments
1
Author [Before_Fluffy]
Homepage
›
Stories
›
Trust Me
›
Comments
+
Trust Me - Comments
ladyschrei
(550)
:
Member
Gender:
♀
Age:
29
Location:
United States
I really liked it! Except 2 things... It's kinda hard to read the text with that background.
You also messed up on the one line. “What did your mother want us to make sure of before she died?” I asked.
Weren't Bill and Tom supposed to be asking that?
Overall, I really liked it!
July 25th, 2009 at 05:03am
Homepage
›
Stories
›
Trust Me
›
Comments
About
Contact
Terms of Service
Privacy Policy
Knowledge Base
Mobile version
© 2006-2024 Mibba.com
You also messed up on the one line. “What did your mother want us to make sure of before she died?” I asked.
Weren't Bill and Tom supposed to be asking that?
Overall, I really liked it!