Trust Me - Comments

  • ladyschrei

    ladyschrei (550)

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    I really liked it! Except 2 things... It's kinda hard to read the text with that background.

    You also messed up on the one line. “What did your mother want us to make sure of before she died?” I asked.

    Weren't Bill and Tom supposed to be asking that?

    Overall, I really liked it!
    July 25th, 2009 at 05:03am