We All Go to Hell - Comments

I love this story so much! Your characterisations are perfect: Draco's attitude to girls, Harry's embarassment (reminds me of how he was with Cho XD) and Luna's craziness :D
It might be an idea to put a little subheading at the top of a chapter if you've changed POV - it was a tiny bit confusing at one point - but other than that, nothing else to ask for! (Except more chapters, of course ^_^)

Definitely subscribing, can't wait to read more! :P

Ok, so I just finished chapter three and I must say that I am loving this story so far!You have a very nice flowing writing style that is really easy to read and though I don't agree with some of the words that you used (that's just a me thing) I really do like your story. I did get a little confused at the beginning of the second chapter because I didn't realize that it had switched point of views, so I was kind of puzzled why second year girls were staring at her haha :-p But other than that, really well done, and I look forward to reading more of this :)

Oh, I am so subscribing to this! I've only read the first chapter but I love it! You're a gret writer, and I've been looking for some good Harry Potter stories, and this is perfect. Keep up the good work! :D

Layout:I like the colors you chose, black and green. You put an emphasis on the Slytherin house, so using those colors was a good idea. I also like the background.

Summary:It seemed a little jumbled because you used line breaks instead of paragraphs. You also gave a little too much information and I felt that I knew too much about the story before it started. It still pulled me in and a I felt like I had to read it.

Content:I’m not big on first person stories but I don’t think you could have explained their feelings well enough in any other POV as you have in this one. It seems a little cliché at times, but it’s the very cute and romantic ones. Like when she dropped the book on her foot and Harry helped, that was adorable. I like that Draco doesn’t know how to act with her so he acts like a tosser. It makes me laugh.

Comments:I’m subscribing to this, I think it’s very cute and interesting. I really hope you continue it.

eee i love this story! it's almost like.. intoxicating how draco acts. i can't wait the next update!
oh and please don't turn him like.. overly nice or something, i mean it's your story of course!

Shouldn't this be labeled as a fan fiction, not a true story?

I really like this :) update soon!

This was great. ^.^
But I'm not a fan of Harry Potter fanfics... D:
I'm sorry. :(

Hehe I love it.
I hate and love Malfoy all in one -
and I think Harry should stick around. Addrena needs a buddy like her.
=]

This is good. Can't wait for more.

I subscribed, please update soon :D

i like it =D

i hate draco but i absolutely love TOM <3

aw, i loved how harry was in this chapter :)

ahaha.

that was a funny chapter.

I think I love this.
No, I do.
(:

Oh wow, amazing start. I'm liking it, update soon please! It'll give me a good story to read while I'm in Washington :]

I really like this (:

amazing start.

subscribing!

Ohmygod! I like this a lot I don't usually read these stories but this one is Great!