Black - Comments

I like this story! I was just kinda bored... so after commenting you, I decided i would check out your work!
Nice and simple. You didn't overdo it at all, and it wasn't completely unbelievable.
Nice!

This was really great! I think you represented the color perfectly!
you included death, depression, confusion, and you were still able to squeeze a bit of romance in there!
Well done!