I like this story! I was just kinda bored... so after commenting you, I decided i would check out your work! Nice and simple. You didn't overdo it at all, and it wasn't completely unbelievable. Nice!
This was really great! I think you represented the color perfectly! you included death, depression, confusion, and you were still able to squeeze a bit of romance in there! Well done!
Nice and simple. You didn't overdo it at all, and it wasn't completely unbelievable.
Nice!