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  • The Molextah

    The Molextah (100)

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    Not trying to be rude, but it was kind of difficult for me to read it :( because of the color of the text + the background. But I managed after a while :) Twas great.
    October 8th, 2010 at 07:40am
  • Joe'sSmirkingRevenge

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    that was soo cuute :D
    this is the first LxLight story I've found on mibba! finally! there should be more..
    I love the kissing in the rain bit, it reminds me of my profile picture ^^ :D
    April 19th, 2010 at 01:07am
  • Tomomi-chan

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    the way you fit everything around that moment in the rain was great. when i saw that on t.v, i wished they'd expand on that. anyway thanx. you should make a bigger story on this.
    August 31st, 2009 at 02:40am
  • lizicea7x

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    nena suena bn aunk n toy familiarizda kn la serie a ver si luego hacemos una kn la serie de BLOOD+
    August 19th, 2009 at 12:55am
  • narutoforewa

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    I liked it. it was short and sweet ^^ LxLight <333
    August 11th, 2009 at 04:19pm
  • Iris Absurd

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    That was hilarious! XD

    To Light: L's mine. bitch! lmao
    August 4th, 2009 at 01:47am
  • Try me.

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    Wow, it was Awesome! i love death note too! my friend, : A r i - K i t t y
    told me to check this story out, it's really cute and good. sweet, short and simple. it gets right to the point. awesome! :D
    July 31st, 2009 at 05:56pm
  • moxie;

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    ;D Of course you get comments!
    It was so darn cute~ *-*

    >.< I Love L & Light.
    So cuuuute.
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    July 29th, 2009 at 02:42am
  • She paints me blue

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    Ou, So Awesome !! It's So Cute ! I Love L Too !! Great Story !! Do You Think You'll Be Writing More DEATH NOTE Stories ? It Would Be Cool . . . =]
    July 28th, 2009 at 09:08pm
  • sweet_revenge123

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    As i don't think I'll get any comments I will comment my own story!!!
    I love the story and I love L!!!!
    July 24th, 2009 at 10:34pm
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