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She Said Poptarts (150)

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Wow, I loved this one shot. (: It was so cute! You really managed to portray the kids so well.
Making them think that her sister was eating weeds. I had to chuckle at those parts. (:

May 18th, 2010 at 08:26pm

Psycho Lunatic (115)

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This is amazing, I love the way you wrote them talking so innocently about drugs which they should know nothing about.

September 5th, 2009 at 11:30am

productionandstyle (100)

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Wow. Great job with this one, you portrayed the innocence of youth really well. And how you balanced out the evils of drugs with that innocence was really well-crafted on your part.

I loved your layout, too.

You've got a really great way with words. How you mentioned the little boy calling it "re-hap" instead of "rehab". That's something I used to do when I was a kid, I'd get things wrong all the time.

Congratulations!

September 2nd, 2009 at 03:57am

Chewy Cheese (100)

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Aww, I really love the way you wrote this.
It was so lovely and definately protrayed that child's point of view, very realistically.
Wonderfully written x

July 25th, 2009 at 02:05pm