That was really good. C: I really loved how you wrote that. It seemed to describe the sad reality of how cruel homophobics can be, and also how much affect they can have on a person. I also loved the ending. Very creative, it showed how much she cared about her lover.
Oh, and I can't really check your grammar because (I'm assuming, please correct me if I'm wrong) you're British, and I'm in America. I don't know all of the rules over there so you're off the hook, missy. ;)
I really loved how you wrote that. It seemed to describe the sad reality of how cruel homophobics can be, and also how much affect they can have on a person.
I also loved the ending. Very creative, it showed how much she cared about her lover.
Oh, and I can't really check your grammar because (I'm assuming, please correct me if I'm wrong) you're British, and I'm in America. I don't know all of the rules over there so you're off the hook, missy. ;)