Just Smile, Please? - Comments

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Hey thanks for the comment
loved the story
ima subscribe
update soon
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The guys a jerk ¬_¬
But none the less.. awesome story!
Update soon?
And could you maybe infrom me when you have a new chapter??

Started reading and couldn't stop, what will happen next? add more soon, thats an order! :)

I'm glad you told me about your story! It's really good! :D
Although i cant believe he jus said that to her after they jus
saw each other again!
Well anyways, i love this story and ima subscribe :]]
Can't wait for the next update!!

Great story. You write in fantastic detail and I think you are a great writer. Can't wait for more :)

HOLY CRAP!
notttttttttttttt seein that comingg!
MORE SOON!

:D

more soooon! (NOW)

hey its okay. I asked ofr feedback and she gave feedback. Thanks agian to everyone for subscribing :)

:D I liked the story. (the comment above mine seems a bit harsh with all the pointing out errors >.<) I'm subscribing now.

I know this will seem miniscule, but could you possible double space between paragraphs? It looks a bit cluttered. Also, the 'images and links' rules have changed, so you will have to make the banner part of the layout. Oh, and there are such things as comma's and semicolons. Don't be afraid of them, not everything has to have a full stop. Those are the only problems I have with the format. The story itself is pretty good so far. I like how much you write in detail, and the characters seem pretty well developed. I hope you don't take my critiscm the wrong way. Keep working on it, I'm subscribing.
:cute:

oh sheyottt.
updateee!!!!!!

hey! thanks for asking me to read this, its awesome!!!

Ah! You should make me a character?
My name is Mercedes but I prefer Sadie.

I could be Whit's new friend at Hartman.
But, I'll be rebellious like her. And my parents sent me away
too. We could get into all kinds of trouble together?
But don't box it down to just that. You can expand the character
to anything you'd like. :D If you decide to use me as a character, please message me?

P.S. I LOVE this story! The same thing happens to me all the time.
Except, I fell in love at the beach. My last night there I met the most
amazing boy ever. ALMOST lost my virginity to him and I haven't talked to him since June 23rd.. the night we met. It sucks so much
and my heart hurts every time I think of him. So I can definitely relate to Whit.

Sorry for venting haha. But yes, please use me as a characterrr

it's really clustered.
you need a comma in like 2 places , but *high-five yo
it made me giggle out loud.
WHOOPIE !
UNDERAGED DRINKING & dancing with a hot guy you don't know that might be a rapist is thrilling.

I just read more of your story. It's really awesome, your writing skills are great! ;)

This is really well writin, it's so intresting :)

:) simz :)

So far I really like this. Please read my story, Redmption and tell me what you think. ; )

awwww :'(
more soon

This is really intresting :)

:) simz :)