Forgotten, Not Forgiven. - Comments

Sad. Sad but Real i absolutely hate it when people sugar coat things and make everthing seem too easy to ever have it take place in the real world, stories that make life seem like it's all rainbows and butterflies. Thats why i love this so much you made this real and believable and i can't thank you enough for that but i'll try. Thank you for the story i absolutely adored it *i was crying the whole time ^-^"* Great job it is definately (without a doubt) one of the best STORIES (not just one of the best Joncer stories or PATD stories and i have read ALOT of fanfiction...a scary amount) that I've ever read

Amazing. Seriously, breathe taking. It almost made me cry.

Thanks for joining the contest.

I like the title, but I'm not fond of the length. That's just me though, I'm a very VERY picky reader.

Also, I don't like the layout. Brown is just...an ugly color. In general, brown is not attractive, unless it's hair? I guess. I'm not sure, even so, I don't like the color brown. That is my point right there.

I like that you started with dialogue, that's a plus in my book.

Wtf. I want to know what he did!

chapped, cold and quick, I adore that. That is such an interesting way to describe a kiss.

Ooo he raped him. That makes sense. I'm slow.

Anywho, what makes me laugh was when I realized this was an Panic fic, a Panic song came on my itunes. Haha. Anywho, I enjoyed this.

I liked your descriptions. I liked the setting and the plot.

It was sad, and had a very sad feel to it which is good. Gives you brownie points.

Whoa this was really sad but I love it I do hope you win you must keep writing or i shall come to your home and kill you. Well no not really but talent like yours should not be wasted

i loved it, awesome! make it into a story, i say =P

I like this story. I feel for both characters and the diaglouge is simple yet deep. Good job XD

I'm not one for cheesy one-shots, but I really liked this xD

Congratulations - You're the second place winner in my Fanfic Slash Contest.
Prizes:
a) a comment on another story of your choice (PM me the link)
b) a link to this story on my profile
c) a link to this story on my signature for two months
d) me whoring this story to five of my friends

I love this. I think I'm actually crying, it was so sad, and sweet. And beautiful.

Awww, I love it so much :]
It shouldn't be turned into a story.
ts too good for that, but its arguable that it would be a good one :3

i absolutley love it. I hope you win!

Greats =] i really enjoyed this, As i said in a way this is some what how my life seems/is atm so it hit somethiing with me, i loved it =]

Brock.

this is really interesting...
anyway,
i TRIED my best at pretending it was a girl [god, I must sound so retarded] and i THINK i succeeded. good writing.
very, very sad.
and very very awesome!

aw so sweet ^-^ and of course AMAZING!! like everyone else has pointed out already

SEE! THIS IS WHAT I CALL AMAZING.

I'm beyond serious, this was really good. You're really good at one shots, and I know it. We know it, you know it.

It's really sad too. I can't say much about it now, but you know what I think. It's really good. Good luck on the contest, I hope you win, srsly.

it was really great despite my not so enthusiastic reaction on Friday.. tell me if u win!!

i still can't believe i got 3rd place!! *angry..not happy* but wtv..

chat with ya later.. =]

Its really sad! Poor Spencer :( very good though keep it up :)

Oh, my. I love it. Love it, love it, love it.
When he went, "I raped you", I was like... WHOAAAA! :O
I especially loved the ending.

You write great one-shots. :D Keep it up.

that was good!

Whoa, this was amaaazing.
:D