Leaving - Comments

But there were no spelling errors! She is Le Grammar and Spelling Queen! :3
Unless you guys are American, therefore Australia has different spelling to you =)

And Ali-bell, awesome fic man. I like that you started the story after they'd fought. Beautiful stuff. Again, dialogue is genius, flows so greatly!

:3 :3 :3

Aww, poor Brennie Boo!

One Shot for One Shot

I really enjoyed this. I'm not one for Rydens normally but I thought it was very well written.

It was sad, and I felt bad for Brendon and Ryan even.

Your descriptions and emotions were well done.

Aside from a few spelling errors not bad.

The only critique I have is that a few sentences didn't flow very well, and it's sort of difficult to read. Maybe a lighter background color or font color?

HAPPY BIRTHDAY ALISON!!

this was good. you're a really descriptive, emotional writer. I liked it quite a lot and i've kind of moved on from any type of p!atd fic. Good job. =] i mean, i saw a few spelling errors and such, but there wasn't anything in there that ruined it.

Aww, poor Brendon.
That was sad. I liked it though.
I haven't read a P!ATD story in probably like over a year, and this was a nice one.

I hate you with a passion.
And no, you do not get a long breakdown comment like usual because if I re-read this or go through it piece by piece I do believe I wont have a functioning heart afterwards.

Without your words my voice is nothing

That is devastating.
This is devastating.

I love your work and everything you write and whilst this is a fantastic fic and excellently written, I do have to say I hate it and wish it didn't exist.... for obvious reasons.

Love!!

Awww.
poor b-den