Puzzle - Comments

You like boy relationships don`t u?(:
Will seems like ocd lol
they are really cute and so is this sotry love it
the ending was cute ha ha
I love your stories(:

Bahahaha!!! I want mores! :D yet again, dialogue is genius, so natural. I love the way you write the funny stuff, so great. But yeah, would also love a bit more description of the setting. But the conversation between Simon/ Will is so fecking good it doesn't really matter.

Drools :3

yay, this was real cute, great job =]

One Shot for a One Shot

This. Was. AWESOME! :D
I really like almost-smut slash stories and yours was niiiicccee..

“What?” Will asked.

Simon looked at him innocently. “Nothing.”

Will went back to his sorting, and Simon snickered. “What?”

“You’re cute.”

Will made a face. “I am not.”

“Yes, you are. Look at you, sorting out your pieces,” he laughed as he gestured at the two neat piles.

Will looked at Simon as if he’d just said something terribly offensive. “This is how you’re supposed to do it.” That was too cute

“William, you are adorable.” Simon kissed his neck, feeling his Adam’s apple move up and down as he swallowed.

“I am not.” As if to prove his point, he pulled Simon closer, kissing him almost violently.

“Look at that pout,” Simon teased breathlessly. He laughed softly as he shifted his weight onto one hand, the other creeping down to Will’s waistline where he started to undo the other boy’s belt. Ah, that killed me when you didn't let them do it!!

But I digress. That was a very very good fic. Keep up the good work

Will would proberbly argue with me, but this story is adorable! I love how you've portrayed the characters, they're really sweet.

“Well, at least I’ll be with you,”
Sappy, but still very cute.

I love how Simon and Will argue even when they're kissing. It's a nice change from the overly-fluffy romances I've seen. Good work!

1. O.o to the comments page! What the?!

2. I just came on here to say HAPPY BIRTHDAY ALISON!!

but 3. I ended up becoming enthralled and reading the entire fic. HOLY CRAP THAT'S GORGEOUS AND AMAZINGLY CUTE!!
And I must give you a MASSIVE applause!! That is the closest thing you've ever written to smut. And it was done amazingly. You are amazing. Your writing is amazing. This fic is FREAKING AMAZING!! :arm:

I really really like this. :D

I love how most of this is just dialogue, but you really got the characters across well. I loved that style, although a little more description could be handier to picture it well. Overall I loved it :)

One Shot For One Shot :]

Aw, this is so adorable! :3 I love your characterisation, and the way you write dialogue is really natural and flows brilliantly.

“Puzzle Nazi,” Simon muttered under his breath.

“What?”

“I said, would you like some water? I was going to get some.” That made me laugh :tehe:

When Will's mum came in, I was like NOOO omgno: I wanted boysex ~~ :XD

There was a bit too much dialogue for me, and I found your layout a bit distracting :twitch: But it was so lovely and fluffy. It was really nice :]