Indecent Proposal - Comments

Hot damn! This is by far the best slash I've read in....Forever. And I've read some pretty freakin good ones..

I love the picture you picked to make the banner with. I love that photo of them. The lighting is perfect and they both look so awesome in it.
The layout is really well done as well.

Moving onto the actual story now. :XD

You've got really good grammar and spelling. You're very good at writing it seems like. (:

I loved how you went about this. This is by far the most creative of the one shots I have read thus far. I loved the detail you've got in here. I also liked the way you portrayed Ry. He's not so innocent in your one shot like he is in most stories. :XD

Your sex scene was so well written. It was hot and I loved it. :weird From the entries I have read, it was really the best one. But we'll see what the other entries have in store for me.

I loved your one shot. It was creative and well written.