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  • tellmewhattodo.

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    i like this you should keep on updating lol :)
    June 24th, 2010 at 03:06pm
  • moonyandpadfoot

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    That was amazing!! i hate Snape (sorry, don't kill me people) but dude, haha that was amazing :D
    September 6th, 2009 at 06:31pm
  • Julienne

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    Two words.

    More.
    Please
    I will have to agree.
    July 21st, 2009 at 12:24am
  • the fallen.

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    Two words.

    More.
    Please
    July 16th, 2009 at 01:55am
  • WingsOfTheNight

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    This is a really good fic.... yet another pairing to add to my List.

    loved the twist, i literally went, whaadaafaaaah?! ahaha... ahem.

    i think you should continue it. and by think i mean, if you don't i shall do something so deadly i cant even think of it right now.

    xoxoxox *hugs for uberness*
    August 14th, 2008 at 09:31pm
  • cups and cakes.

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    Shit. This is rather good.
    I loved how you used your words.
    It's kind of funny too, how he put on the whole 'act.'
    I shall begin to read HP fics now... =]
    November 14th, 2007 at 03:34pm
  • The Lovecraft

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    awww great idea! I like the way you write.
    i see now you haven't updated in a while. is that it or... should i expect more?
    October 19th, 2007 at 03:38am
  • jocelynplease

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    -gasp-
    WOW. Totally didn't see that coming.
    At first, I couldn't help but think, "Ewww....Snape?"
    And then, with the twist, all I could think of was, "More?"
    September 23rd, 2007 at 04:13pm
  • blueraincoat.

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    Meg you are too shy. You should really post more. I love the way you write and the words you use. I think your "love poison story" is different from others (and by that I mean better) because of that twist in the end, I loved it. Tbh I giggled with Tonks.
    August 19th, 2007 at 01:34am
  • NeoSteph

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    yay snonks will rule the world. I loved it you have no need to be nervous about posting more fics in the future. thanks for the dedication <3
    August 18th, 2007 at 10:49pm
  • Make you Smile.

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    I can only agree with the first post, it's written really well and I liked it a lot. :con: Update soon plz.
    August 16th, 2007 at 11:03pm
  • Matt Smith

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    Oh my.
    Thank you for commenting and reading and being so nice about my noob attempt at fanfic. =D
    I really, really appreciate it.
    August 16th, 2007 at 07:53pm
  • astroz0mbie

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    I usually don't read HP fanfics, but I've considered looking more into it since I've read this. :tehe:

    I saw no errors, forgive me if there was, and it was nicely written. You write very...let's say: maturely. Maybe it's because I'm still under an HP infatuation 'spell', but I thought you wrote similar to Rowling. Sort of. The little twist at the end of chapter 2 was something I think was nicely done. You have a very 'professional' voice when you write. Hopefully that made sense. The words you chose were perfect.

    Good job.
    August 16th, 2007 at 05:48am