I'm really blown away at all the comments about this story- I didn't expect it at all.
It did make me feel kind of bad leaving you all hanging at this end so I've posted the sequel up called 'One Heart'- so if you need another dose of dear ol' Nat and the gang then feel free to head on over :)
I love this story and I will be happy if you wrote a sequel. But if you decide to leave it this way it this way I will also be happy. It's true that no one gets their happy ending, it almost never happens. Movies make it seem that in life everything works out and it's not like that. I really loved your story!!!
I loved reading this story! It's so good to see authors not writing fairytale endings. They're not that realistic- not everything ends in rainbows and butterflies. But, if you want to post the sequel, I'm not going to complain =D Good job!