I just found your story and it's amazing!!!!! I love the way that they met, it's so sweet. I can't wait to see who it was that came.... hope you update soon!
Nicely done! This chapter for some reason struck me as a section of an episode from a television show. A cohesive scene with dynamics, twists, humor, and other such characteristic literary tools. I liked the style a lot. As the guy before has said, "keep it up"!
I love the way that they met, it's so sweet.
I can't wait to see who it was that came.... hope you update soon!