In My Dreams It's Me And You - Comments, page 3

ladyofsorrows101 (100)

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I just found your story and it's amazing!!!!!
I love the way that they met, it's so sweet.
I can't wait to see who it was that came.... hope you update soon!

December 26th, 2009 at 09:01am

choirgirlx3 (100)

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I LOVE IT UPDATE SOON!!!!!

December 26th, 2009 at 12:10am

dinugget (100)

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Aww,poor Nathalie:(
I hate Jake!
Wheres Brian?!
Bring Brian XD

More,please?

December 24th, 2009 at 07:14pm

dinugget (100)

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I like this story
And I like BriBri

December 18th, 2009 at 08:22am

DiabolicalDancer (105)

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Fillers are fine so long as chapters follow... such as a chapter explaining what just happened! Can't wait for more :)

December 11th, 2009 at 09:30am

DiabolicalDancer (105)

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Nicely done! This chapter for some reason struck me as a section of an episode from a television show. A cohesive scene with dynamics, twists, humor, and other such characteristic literary tools. I liked the style a lot. As the guy before has said, "keep it up"!

November 26th, 2009 at 08:31am

OlliexVonZeppelin (100)

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I like this story, Keep it up .
Its kinda fresh from the stuff I read now.

July 26th, 2009 at 07:09pm