Foul Play - Comments

Draco and Cormac. <3 One of my favorite, and most uncommon, pairings. I love you for writing this. <3

priceless.
This has to be the greatest Draco pairing since Drarry
this was funny and hot and entertaining
to say the least
looooved it.

Draco and Cormac.

That was amazing.

This has to be the oddest pairing I've come across in a while
Nonetheless it was fantastic
I love your writing
It makes me ooh arr

Uh, yes. Draco/Cormac ftw!!

That was amazing. You've got to write more of this pairing. :D

And if this was your worst, I'd LOVE to see your best.

I remember seeing this on the rate the story game a week or so ago, and I kept meaning to check it out.
this is motherfucking fantastic, bb.
Possibly the weirdest pairing I've ever read, but god. :lmfao
oh draco.
I would try to review but I'm in a little bit of a rush; just wanted to drop a comment and tell you that this is great, honest.

One shot for One shot
This must be the only story with this pairing :tehe:

This had me giggle so much, and I love Draco's changes; going from being pretty much a whimpering mess, to sticking his wand into Cormac’s eye :XD

This;
"I'd do favours for Granger anytime. She's cute, if you're into that kind of thing."

"What, mudbloods?"

"No, women."
Made me laugh so hard, it's just so dead one perfection :XD Perfect answer to stupid question :tehe:

It was really fun to read, I'd wish I could describe a bit more how amusing it was, and how well written and just great it is, but the words just seem to not come out today :grr:

I really liked this story though :cute: It's just so :lmfao

^ The comments above me said it all.
I can't stop laughing, and I was already spazzing uncontrollably as it was.
:XD
"Whore of Slytherin."
:lmfao :lmfao :lmfao :lmfao :lmfao :lmfao :lmfao
That made my freaking day. :XD

Oh my God, Sam. I don't know whether to laugh or drool. I never would have thought about this pairing (although I do admit I had the hots for Freddie Stroma as I watched HBP :tehe:) but the way you wrote it, I can believe it! Like, a lot of times I see a really out there pairing, it doesn't really make much sense and the writer doesn't do a good job of explaining it because most of the time it's only because the writer thinks it's hot. But oh, Sam. I believed this! I could see Cormac acting like that, and since both of them are stubborn and arrogant, neither of them are backing down.

Although I almost thought it would've been Ginny who had paid Cormac, not Hermione, but only because it's touched in the books that Hermione doesn't really understand how serious Quidditch is to the players. But then she might've done something like that just to help Harry if he was getting really stressed, so I suppose that does make sense that way too. Either way, it was just something that crossed my mind as I was reading (before I got distracted by the Draco/Cormac :yah).

I love Draco's new nickname, Whore of Slytherin. Now when I think of him, I'm going to be reminded of that. :XD So that's the real reason he was spending so much time in the Room of Requirement during HBP! :lmfao

And the ending is simply perfect. As I said before, neither of them will back down to the other, so I can see their sex being really fast-paced, and constantly switching from Cormac being dominant, to Draco being dominant, and such.

Oh and for the record, this is not the worst piece you've ever written. :hand: It's just a cute, fun, hot piece. Because I'm not sure if you can really do anything else with Draco/Cormac. :XD However, this is probably the worst review I've ever written, but the point I'm trying to make is that I love your writing, and that you are a genius. Share the talent, please? :tehe: :arms:

loooooooooool, Sam, jfc. :lmfao I'm halfway through and I feel incredibly dirty. :lmfao I fucking love this, though. Oh my god, it's completely ridiculous/hilarious. I'll tell you what I think when I'm actually done and I promise to review as soon as I get a chance.

:tehe:

:XD:XD:XD
THIS IS THE MOST MENTAL THING I HAVE EVER READ IN MY ENTIRE LIFE. And I love it! :lmfao :cute:

i'm gonna go wee myself now, ly samwise.:arms:

:lmfao This was hilarious and amazing and hot. :yah ~~

i wish i could leave a proper comment, but bmfff.
it was brilliant.

:yah :yah :yah
How can I judge this - it's, as Jade put it 'pure win'
I'm gonna have sweet dreams tonight :file:
-pretends to be Draco -

“It appears your crotch already has.” Came the snarky reply, and with a look to kill Draco clutched his robe a little tighter and flung himself out of the door towards the stadium. "Looks like Hagrid's not the only giant in the castle!"    
:tehe:

Oh, and thank you for the dedication :arms: Highly appreaciate it ;;P

:lmfao:lmfao:lmfao

I cant stop giggling at this. I honestly can't. It was amazing, I really loved it. Maybe when I've calmed down enough I'll be able to write a constructive comment? :tehe:

Just pure win Sam. Honestly. :arms: