Eternal Dawn - Comments

loved the new update

Love the story put dont make jared die. Are you still updating the story?

That's a really bad way to end it, so I suggest you try another way.

Please update soon. you cant end it like that

OMG NELLI!!!!!!!!!
YOU CANT FINISH IT LIKE THATTTTTTT
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!
nelllllliiiiiiiiii DD:
n poor jareddddddddddddddddddddddd

its amazing

*takes out a chain-saw and complates about killing the author... But then realizes that if she does that... there'll be no more story.*
LOL, I'm just kidding about the chain saw threat... :)
But it's not fair!
I just started reading this story; it was when it had 26 chapters. So I ended up where she got knocked out!
It's not fair!...

But anyway, I really like the story and how it's going.
I guess you don't like Bella much? (it's kinda obvious :) ), but even with that, I still like the story.

I didn't like how she was kinda... slutty, but I don't want to complain or anything...
(so will you make her choose soon?)

Anyway: I still like the story!
(and sorry if this sounded kind of mean; I just wanted to give my opinion to you; I hope this wasn't to mean?)

Good luck on the next chapter; update soon!-- Or as soon as you can.

O.M.J!!!!
Just so you know I am at the edge of my seat, what happens next? Is anyone dead? The suspense is killing me!!
Update soon please!

Anneli u did not just do that.........
U DIDNT NOT JUST DO THAT
even tho i like paul more
YOU DID NOT JUST KILL JACOB!
OR EMBRY
OR JARED
OR SAM
NO NO NO!
DAMN ITTTTTTTTT ANNELI!
UPDATE OR U DIEEEEEE
even tho u r my friendd

more soon?
i want to know what happens next

Whaat !
The wolves could have taken them all !
>_<' Damn it.

BAHAHHAHHAH I WIN!
SHE LOVES PAUL YES YES!
jay can go do something i dunnooo
uhh ohhhh
NO NO NAUGHTYYYYYY ANNELI
DONT GO INTO THE FOREST FILLED WITH BLOODY VAMPS!
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATEEEEEEEE

Ah, I love the story so far.
And it sucks that I had to read it when the end was like that, where she was going to give herself to the vamps.
Yikes.

And I so want her with Paul! Instead of Jay, he's kind of random. lol.
PLEASE! Don't make the characters die! Well.. any of the wolves.

cliffhangerrrr!

Finally!!! She admitts it!!! Woot!!
Awww.. I started to cry. :(
Very good, now hurry and update to make it
all better!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Pweeeeeeeeeeeeeeese!!!!!!!!!!

someone is going to be in trouble later
more soon?

O.M.J.!! I wonder whats going to happy.
I'm at the edge of my seat, I can't wait till you update!

oz noz!!! Hurry, update soon!!!!!
pweese!!!!!!

I LOVE IT!
BAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHA JARED ISSS SOOO SOO SOO FUNNY!
hehehe
wed get to see you naked!
:S Jane scawie scawie!!!!!!!!!!
PLEASE PLEASE UP DATE SOON ANNELIA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

loved the updates
wonder who she came with jane?
more soon?