The ending for this story was great i mean its happy. BUT NO !! its fucking hard to accept! so whats happened now? will she forgive brian after all the shit she went through? what??
This story was absolutely fantastic. I adored your characterization of all the boys. I've been subscribed for a fair while but I don't think I've commented before. Sorry, I'm a bad person. But seriously, this story made me squee with delight every time I got a subscription email. So yeah, thanks for posting this.
My hope is that you'll write some more Zacky fics in the future. :) Fingers crossed.
Holy shit that was cool. Cliche, I'll agree, but still cool. I don't why I keep laughing about the ending though, you know, Zacky being psychotic and being the evil ring leader. Maybe it's because I found his sociopathic behavior sexy before this chapter? Wow, I like how she completely forgot about knowing them until that moment, crazy. I wonder how she would have reacted if she found out sooner? Go Brian's will power! Did the cousin die? I assume not but eh, ya never know. Zacky was totally awesome before this... I wouldn't mind being held captive by him... Not in the least bit... And he certainly wouldn't have to worry about me escaping... /creeper moment Anywayss, good ending. Yay! :]
That was the most awesome ending ever. It was just epic. My jaw hurts from having fallen down. I can't say anything but that is not how I expected it to end.
Woah dude that twist was so much bigger than what I expected!!!! So really Zacky was just a crazy motherfucker the whole time! But I still think if that was the case and really Brian didn't want to be that mean he could have been more like Matt.
Nikki Sixx is right, she should totally leave Brian for Matt. Now that would make a good sequel... *wink wink nudge nudge* haha no pressure I'mma go check out your new story now :)
:) Haha I was just thinking what if this whole story was a dream and she's just about to wake up to Brian's beautiful (and non violent) face. I'm sure whatever is the next chapter is going to be amazing. So update again soon yeah cause you're killing us with that cliffhanger!
Well it was badass while it lasted. Great ending, but id really like to see more about Brian and Meg. ,#
Keep writing dude!