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  • Bob Dylan.

    Bob Dylan. (115)

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    This is really good. I love the story line.
    You need to watch your spelling and grammar. Otherwise welldone!
    I really enjoyed it.
    August 27th, 2009 at 11:06pm
  • YummyJonas

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    This was pretty nice ;)

    Hey! Want to enter it to this site's contest (uh uh I take no credit of the site being mine... okay i'm the co-admin or something) http://writerattention.webs.com/contest09.htm You could send in what you have and they'll eventually tell you where needs fixing
    July 30th, 2009 at 11:02am
  • bloodravyn

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    watch your grammar and spelling, please
    otherwise, i think this has potential
    July 29th, 2009 at 03:02pm
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