Hitmen - Comments

Very nice story.

Gosh Erin, can you stop being so epic :XD

Naw, I'm only joking your epicness makes me smile :tehe:

I loved it, it was well written and all together a good read -- even if I was a bit confused for a bit :XD

Your mad magical writing skills make me jealous :weird

Good job!

One Shot for Oneshot :cute:
I like how you opened this story, with that fact. I didn't know that, actually so that is my new fact of the day. :cute:

I like the picture in your layout; it got me wondering how it was connected to the story and I love how you kind of subtly slipped in that little bit about Cheif having both sides of her nose pierced.

Another new fact! I didn't know what the phobia of feet was called. I like how random this is; we just drop right into the conversation without the faintest clue what's going on.

Oh wow! That was a major, "What the fuck just happened?" at the end. Needless to say, I'm still confused, but I really liked this oneshot, just because it was so random. I think I might go read the other one you were requesting in the thread as well. :cute:

One shot for one shot.

Loved it :D
t'was really good all the way though :)

HOLY CRAP MAN.

The whole time, while I was giggling like a complete idiot at the random convo, I was waiting to see where the story was going.

Then, Samantha...and BAM. Oh, wow.

Wow, wow, wow.

I'm suscribing so you get more stars; that's how awesome this drabble is.

*is grinning like a fool* Nice, sexy. Real nice. Loved it, and remember what I said about comments? *looks up* ^_^

Oh, and the thing about Commander and Chief reminding you of us. *grins even more*

I LOVE THE LAYOUT TOO :crazy:.

One Shot for One Shot.
I loved this and I still do.
I hate feet too :tehe:.
I like 'em in socks or shoes or heels :cute:.
Anywho, your very straightforward and I like that :cute:.
It also goes well with third person.
I like your style of writing -- for an odd reason, it just keeps you hooked and it's unescapeable like poison. I love this so much.
I loved everything about it :cute:.
The ending was a shocker :tehe:.

The ending couldn't be more perfect. It left me like 'Oh shit, wha...?' but that's fine, because I love it when that happens. :weird