Autumn Sweethearts - Comments

Sorry I put that comment^^^^3 times=]] Accident...

I like it a lot! U should make it more than a one shot!=DD

I like it a lot! U should make it more than a one shot!=DD

I like it a lot! U should make it more than a one shot!=DD

Awwh, this was very cute. Although, I would have liked if you would have gone into more detail with the whole thing, maybe talked more in depth about how they were both so shy around other people.

The story line was adorable though. And I love the title. (:

And I hate to be a bitch, but I'm just leaving a constructive cristisems..ms.s (I can't spell that word.) comment. (:

When you're typing up dialouge, you really should add punctuation to it.

See how you have your's like this:

“I think it’s right” she says and smiles.

”So do I” he smiles back.

It looks more organized and easier to read if you do it like so:

“I think it’s right.” she says and smiles.

”So do I.” he smiles back.

See how I added the periods? (:

All in all, this was pretty good entry. I liked it.

Thanks so much =)
Good luck with the contest.
I'm sure its not lol, mine isnt very good at all in my opinion =P

Nice. I liked how you didn't add the names in until the end. It was a good effect. :) Much better than my one shot for that same contest, may i just say....

Haha thanks.
I was so scared to put it on lol.
Thanks for reading it =)

Haha first comment. Shweet!
Good job.