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  • solovely;

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    I liked the creatvity. And the hiding places in the story and how you explained it. :)
    October 24th, 2009 at 04:07am
  • XSoulXLoverX

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    I think this was a nicely and well written story! :)
    August 10th, 2009 at 04:27am
  • StayPerfect

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    I really enjoyed this. The plot was solid and ran the whole was through which is good. I love your imagination with the pictures and all the hiding places and such, it was very good and believable too.
    I liked the discription of the relationship between both Conner and his sister and the obvious jealousy she had for Elisa.
    Well done.
    August 4th, 2009 at 08:21pm
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