Aww! It's so nice to see that Andi and Justin have made up :) And yay for their parents being locked up! We've waitied, what?, 22 chapters for that to happen so we're as relieved as they are that they're finally free of them and can move on with their lives. And now... I wanna see what happens next so I'm heading over to the sequel :D Well done both of you for such a good story :) xxx
Ooh, wow ^^ First off, I liked the second most recent chapter because we really got to see how deep Andi and Freddie's friendship is... We almost didn't need Andi to tell us that Freddie could tell she'd cut because they are really good friends because you showed it really nicely through the way both of them acted towards each other. And in terms of this last chapter, I agree with im.blueberry :) That Andi wants to defend herself now is really encouraging and kind of exciting too :) It's nice to see that change in her and that Alex was their beside her when she made that decision is really sweet too because it was nice that he could be the first one to see how happy she's just become. More soon please- I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this :D xxx
Another great update! I love how Justin's emotions show us that he really cares for Andi and regrets not being there for her in the past and I also really like how Justin's conversation with Aiden kind of mirrors many of the one's that Andi has had with Alex in that Aiden is really sympathetic and desperate to convince Justin that it's not his fault. xxx
Ooh, great update :) I love how we can see Andi's pain when she sees her reflection and I think it's really realistic how she doesn't want to be like that. Also, the way that she finally sees the two images blend once she's cut herself is a really nice idea :) Oh, and it's nice to see her feeling happy when she's out with Alex, too :) xxx
Another great update :) I hope you get to continue with this 'cause it'd be a real shame if it got cut off in its prime... I loved the way that Justin noticed Andi's ankle and the bruising and the cuts. It was all really nicely described and the fact that she felt humiliated by him seeing it made it so much more real... Great job! xxx
AND...DEAR MRS. LIZA'S MOM: This story is very good, very well-written, and can help us learn more about the world from the viewpoint of (fictional) other people who may be less fortunate than we ourselves are. I think it should be allowed to continue because of it's fantastic authors and storyline. LOVE, Amanda. =3
Okay, anyway, love the new chapter, love the story. =3
I agree with the girl above me :) Short or not, it's a good filler and really sweet as well with the way Alex stands up for Andi to her father and the way that they lay together... Great job, looking forward to more :) xxx
Yay, she's finally telling someone- good for her :) I like how Freddy and Alex are bickering about her and just forgetting that she's there, but look sheepish when she tells them to shut up... It works really nicely and again shows how much they care about her. Great job, 'can't wait to see what happens next :D xxx