The August Project - Comments

oh wow. an update. that was really good

I like this storyy (:

Super cute. I love Lila. She's so innocent.

i absolutely love this story!!
update update update and the world wont come to an end. (:

OMG, wow, first thing I did on Mibba since I left. I loved this chapter. Especially the "bitch please" part. =P That was pretty much amazing.
I'm too exhausted to have any more of a comment than that, though. Sorry! I loved it, though!

Delila!
Oh fuck, it's so funny.
The poor girl couldn't even understand a simple note.
How sheltered...
I have to say, it is sort of cute, though.

Wow... Lila is a lost cause. She doesn't understand a note? She seems smarter than that. But if she didn't get "give me a ring" I doubt she'd say "True that".
But it was funny reading her reply to their note.
And Bethany (I know you'll read this) it's all good that you took awhile, because right now you just should focus on getting better with the tendonitis. I've never had that before (thankfully, it sounds like a bitch), so I'm not sure what the recovery time on that is. But I hope you get well soon.
=)

Haha, so I've realized that like I've posted more than half of the comments on here. And reading comments on both your guys' postings, I've realized that people don't really get the co-authored thing, do they?
But, anyways, I loved this chapter, and I loved that he mixed Cinderella with Rapunzel (I think that's how you spell her name, lol). And more Torchwood references. Oh goodness. But I love their relationship, it's so adorable, and it's very believable. Two queens beats a straight, bahahaha. Damn right. (It's better than yours) Yeah... now I totally have that song stuck in my head, so this comment is done.
My milkshake brings all the boys to the yard, damn right, it's than yours. Okay, now it really is done. Hahaha.

Knowing Lila, she won't XD

why are there two of these stories posted on here?

Sadness! I want to bust a cap in her dad's ass. ('Cause I'm cool like that) And I love that he said "queer dialect". I mean, no one has even HINTED (well, they kinda did) at Power Bottom, lol. Or top. Seriously, though, I'd get emancipated if I was her.

Oh fuck!

XD
I love this so far (:

Whoo! Done with the 6 chapters now. And I think that the Torchwood references in this might soon outnumber the Buffy references in my story. =P
And they're in TROUBLE. Though that dad needs to get the crucifix out of his ass. Like seriously.
Well, good job you guys. =) I'm enjoying it so far, and I can't wait for another update. Totes (I've waited so long to say that, haha) gonna subscribe to it.

Wow... yeah, I'm on a bit of a comment spree. 4th chapter.

“Real men probably don’t hug each other like we just did there, but we don't consider ourselves real men anyways so who gives two shits?” - I actually think that would offend a lot of gay guys. I'm not really personally offended that much, 'cause I'm kinda fluid with my own gender, but most gay guys do think of themselves as real men. And often they think of straight guys as not as manly, because they can't take it up the bum. =P

And they are SO much more patient than I am with a sheltered person. I'd be already annoyed with her questions. And I definitely wouldn't make up some false explanation for holding his hand. But it's probably a good thing that they're not me. =P

Ok, so just finished Chapter 3. And now I have a few questions.
Question Un: How OLD are they?! 'Cause she sounds like she's seven. Seriously. That's insanely innocent.
Question Deux: HOW is she that innocent? In the first one, it said she lived in the circus, which I don't think that the circus people (or would they be called carnies? Or is that just for carnivals?), well, I can't imagine them being that careful with their language.
Question Tres (I can't figure out how to do the little accent mark thing, so... yeah): Is this a co-written story? I imagine it is.
Now for comments.
OMG!! =D Haha, 'cookies'. =P Nice. Yeah... I generally don't refer to it as cookies, but... now I have a new censored term for when I'm around little kids! =D Whoo! And her dad pisses me off. And the whole mom speaking badly about people behind their backs kinda makes me smile, 'cause a lot of 'Christians' that I know are like that. It bugs me how hypocritical people are. But I really hope that Jed and Anthony get Delilah a halter top or something soon. =P

Whoo! First comment! Oh yeah!
Okay, though, West Virginia, and he's SURPRISED that she's a Christian? Haha. I'm only just finished with the second chapter, but I needed to comment. I like it so far, though. I love the banter between Jed and Anthony. How does Jed come from Jerome, though? That seems like it would be Jerry or Jer. But oh well. Off to read more!