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  • MCR_FOR_LIFE

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    update more soon, i love it!
    January 5th, 2010 at 05:05am
  • Devihla

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    Haha! The best part about this chappy is that, for some reason, it's so easy to imagine Mikey doing that hip-roll-arm-flail thing. Haha! =D
    It's really picking up, doll! It's become very captivating and exciting.
    I never really know how to give critisism, 'cause I don't know what the author has in mind as to what or how to write, but you could perhaps describe Gerard's reactions a bit more? Like shocked or nervous or thrilled,because maybe he's never been called 'sugar' and actually felt like someone might like him for more than just his body. But then again, he might be nervous and afraid, 'cause maybe his Sugar Daddy is just playing him to hurt him...
    But I'm gonna let you write. =D
    December 29th, 2009 at 12:07pm
  • Mike Wazowski.

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    8P

    Have I Told You Lately That I Love You?.......

    YAYAYAYYA!

    WHEN'S THE NEXT CHAPTER?!?
    December 29th, 2009 at 02:06am
  • Tommy Joe Ratliff

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    I just saw this last night and I was like, I wish it be updated.
    BAM
    I love this, what a charmer.
    I'm so damn excited!
    <666
    December 27th, 2009 at 10:19pm
  • Devihla

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    Wuhu!
    Looking gooood! ;D
    December 27th, 2009 at 12:32am
  • Mike Wazowski.

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    8D
    I thought you'd never make a new chapter!
    :)
    December 26th, 2009 at 11:54pm
  • manmouth

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    I CAN BORROW YOU MY COMPUTER IF THAT HELPS YOU UPDATE FASTER YEAH OR I CAN MOVE IN WITH YOU AND YOU CAN HAND-WRITE UPDATES SO I CAN READ THEM THEN WE'LL BE HAPPY, RIGHT!?!?!?!! :c
    September 6th, 2009 at 08:11pm
  • V. Valo

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    WHOOT! SHOPPING! xD
    September 6th, 2009 at 04:39pm
  • Devihla

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    Fuck yes! This chappy was incredible!
    I really hope the comp-situation will get solved soon... This story is getting so good and I get a huge fucking grin on my face whenever I see that it's updated!
    Love it, sugar! ;)
    September 5th, 2009 at 11:09pm
  • Mike Wazowski.

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    MAKE MORE OR I'LL DIE
    =D
    September 5th, 2009 at 10:23pm
  • Injection.

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    This is really good. Update when you can.
    September 5th, 2009 at 09:42pm
  • Tommy Joe Ratliff

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    I still love this, it's even better now, I hope you can update again.
    <666
    August 31st, 2009 at 12:52am
  • who

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    arrhh my gosh, this story sounds awesome !!.. i cant wait to read more!!!
    im subscribed!!
    xxx C
    August 31st, 2009 at 12:18am
  • Devihla

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    So Mikey is the one planting bad thoughts in Gerard's mind... Nice! :D
    Keep going!! :D :D
    August 30th, 2009 at 10:43pm
  • manmouth

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    Make Frank like.... fiftythousand years old. HAHAHAHAHA, no, just kidding.. srsly. :c
    Gerard is awesomeness.
    August 30th, 2009 at 11:37am
  • Psyche Adrenaline

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    I'm defintiely excited about the re-write. It seems much more exciting an dramatic. Good luck with it--I'm not going to give up on it.
    August 30th, 2009 at 04:11am
  • manmouth

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    Don't worry, I am still loving this shit because of the idea. I've never read a Frerard like this. <3
    August 29th, 2009 at 10:18pm
  • Eugene.

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    YES. I want to read more. Alot more. I'm going to be that pushy person that people sometimes want to throw rocks at. More please?
    August 29th, 2009 at 05:22am
  • Odysseus

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    I love this :cute:
    Update soon, buddy? XD
    August 4th, 2009 at 04:03am
  • Tommy Joe Ratliff

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    I loved the update, it was rad, I love the lines,
    Looking for someone to spoil and I'm your guy, cause that was just perfect.
    I actually kinda like the chapter length, sure I wanna know more, but it's more intense and what not.
    <666
    July 31st, 2009 at 03:17am
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