Canyon Drop - Comments

I liked this, it was fantastic.
Both endings were meaningful and fantastic.

comment for ending 1: aaaawwwwww that's sweet! i love the idea and this was fabulously written
ending 2: even with a sad ending, you wrote it really well
overall comment:this was really great but
i think you need to elaborate on danni; why was he near the canyon? how did he know it was kelly? were they close friends before? how long was it until they officially were a couple? until they had the baby? how did danni react when he heard about kelly disappearing? etc
also, how far away from town was the canyon?
don't think i don't like this story... i really do. it's probably my favorite of yours!
coysl
xox
liv

wow; this was great.
i thought from the picture it would be a type of funeral or something, but you really had your creative sparks around you to help you write this story. i found it very interesting and wanting more; however there were plenty of mispellings, but that doesnt mean it's bad.