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  • PhoebenPaige

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    okies im hooked now......moarrrrrrrr lol please
    September 16th, 2010 at 12:48am
  • AvengedFanfoREVer

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    Wow! I'm in love with this story!!
    More soon please!!
    August 17th, 2010 at 07:05am
  • Planets.Collide!

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    MORE MORE MORE!
    August 6th, 2010 at 10:47pm
  • Its_RobynXo

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    I didnt know you updated! :(
    But I loved it and I can't wait for the next one!
    July 19th, 2010 at 09:26pm
  • DaniSayWhat?

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    not quite sure how I managed to miss an update. but now it's read and all is right with the world again haha

    and I'm definitely living in my fantasy world right now where the bet sort of just disappears off the face of the earth never to be seen again haha

    <3
    July 8th, 2010 at 02:01pm
  • Fictional.Reality

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    so, i just caught up with the whole story
    and basically i am in love
    I really hope that the bet doesn't come back to bite them in the ass
    <3 Michele
    July 8th, 2010 at 05:36am
  • riellybabie101

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    Loved it
    July 5th, 2010 at 09:38pm
  • life.in.technicolor

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    uh oh... i bet she's gonna find out about the bet soon..... loved the update!
    July 5th, 2010 at 06:35am
  • Tilers Haner

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    Aw, they've fallen for each other! :)
    And Brian was so sweet to stop things going any further. But I just have this horrible feeling that this bet is going to come back and bite him in the ass!
    Loved it as always Hun, can't wait for more :) xx
    July 3rd, 2010 at 12:51am
  • MamaZ

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    wow he must really be in love to turn down sex...damn this is getting good
    July 2nd, 2010 at 12:49am
  • gummibears

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    why do you make so many good stories why? I love this, kudos many kudos
    October 17th, 2009 at 06:14am
  • riellybabie101

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    Loved it, hope things work out for Brian and the guys. Bet should be off.
    September 29th, 2009 at 03:47am
  • Story?Notes!

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    It Is Such A Great Story! Write More :)
    September 27th, 2009 at 10:44pm
  • MamaZ

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    i think bri should back out of the bet and just get with her L if he really likes her
    September 24th, 2009 at 09:59pm
  • Tilers Haner

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    I agree with Andrea, Brian has got to back out of the bet! But still carry on seeing Elizabeth! I think he really does like her!

    Loved it as always hun, can't wait for more :) Clap Clap
    September 24th, 2009 at 08:45pm
  • better.than.sex

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    brian better back the fuck out of this!!!!!!!!!!!
    he can't go on with it! it's not right! more soon!
    September 23rd, 2009 at 06:20am
  • Synfullytwysted

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    Brian has to back out of the bet, but if he stops seeing Elizabeth she'll think it's because of what she told him, and that would be heartbreaking for her.

    Absolutely loved it hun, as always :) xx
    September 23rd, 2009 at 03:52am
  • DaniSayWhat?

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    awww i thought there was gonna be some bloodshed haha

    but that was a sad moment. i can't believe that creeper Joey did that to her! she's so sweet! and Brian better not continue with this bet...there'll be hell to pay.

    <3
    September 23rd, 2009 at 02:14am
  • Derpina.

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    Oh heebyjebus that was exciting for a moment there. =]

    I thought Brian was gonna have to resort to violence to get Joey out of the house. In the end though he's still a hero. Imagine what would happen if he didn't turn up.
    September 23rd, 2009 at 01:17am
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    Brian better back out of the bet now. And the guys better graciously accept it.
    September 23rd, 2009 at 01:11am
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