If I Said I Don't Care, I'd Be Lying - Comments

I really like this story! The long description caught my attention, then when I started to read it, the pieces came together & it started to make sense. But I didn't expect the witness protection program bit. I would love if you updated this one soon! :D

I liked it a lot! There were a few spelling mistakes, but just maybe like two. I liked the humor in it, though it probably wasn't humor.

'A series of unfortunate events' - I liked that.

I kinda liked it. The layout is very cool! i think you can take this story pretty far.

This is really good.
please update soon!