We All Have Been Degraded - Comments

the lost girl, interesting.
although some of her changes are noted I can't wait to see more
as the story progresses.
eep i'm so excited for john to see her.
like you don't even know.

Ahh!! So wonderful. You made the character I gave you even better. Such a great chapter. I can't wait for more!! Love this story so much. It could be a book if it didn't involve any real people's names.

Ahhhh I'm so excited for updates and what you're gonna do with the character :D
I need to know moree, you're amazing haha!

oh thank god, as much as I love this story, its kind of sad seeing john as a total ass.;;

genius!
so now i'm assuming since the transition is done
it's bad girl time?
I'm so excited.
not only to see how she's changed but how john has as well :)

ahh! She's changed omg.
This is just great

Oh my gosh. The tiny little chapter at the end has so much possibility in it!! Are you going to go back and write about that year or are we just skipping it for now and as the story goes on we'll slowly find out what happened in that year? Ooooo I like that idea! Slowly finding out. MUST WRITE CHARACTER PROFILE NOW!

SOOOO, this is amazing. I'm superduper excited for more more more.
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Ahh I loved this, I'm excited to see John post revelation and I wanna know how they meet againnn!

aaaawhh (;
I just read everything ♥♥

John is weird now... he's like being nice, but that's not him. Next chapter please?

Love it! this is really good!!

I love this :)

ooh someones falling for the John charm

This leaves me with mixed feelings towards John. I don't know if he just doesn't know how to be a human that has emotions or if he still is just an ass. Hahaha. Cory got what she deserved!
Keep updating!

Oh my goodness. John is so stupid. -__-
I seriously seriously love this so much.
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I thought it was really clever the thing you did with the paint and connecting that to the shame she felt and that he didnt have any on him

john is awfully confusing.
i can't tell if he genuinely has feelings for her or if he's just in it for the sex.
cuz he goes from being completely sweet to being a complete douche, it's frustrating haha
and i'm so glad this story's getting more attention. it's really well written and it was a shame it wasn't getting any before.

Aw as much as I love John and Lynn in a weird way
I'm happy that she's kinda smartening up haha

So uh, basically. You're one of the most amazing writers I've ever stumbled upon. I like the lengthiness of each chapter. The way you write makes it seem like it's an actual story I'm reading from a book instead of Mibba.
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