Forget Superstition by Wearing It Backwards - Comments

Comment on the story layout
(I know it's not part of the rules to comment here as well, but I thought this would be practical.)

I waited for 10 seconds for the image to load 'cause all I saw was gray, then I saw I had to scroll down. Was that intentional? But other readers might not bother to scroll down, so the big margin/padding on top might be a bad idea. Other than that, I think it's alright. Nothing elaborate but at least it's readable which is the most important.

Oh shit. The end--the end! :cheese:

Brilliantly written.

OOOOOH I KNEW IT!!
haa.
Sorry, i got a little to into it. (:
This was very lovely Natasha.
I love the whole Pete and Ashlee thing, that was cute.
&You know i lovee me some travie, so that just made it better.
But most of all if was Gabriel who swept me off my feet.(=
I've missed your writing. Keep it coming?
xoxox

*rapes comment virgiinty*

OMG!! WOW!!

that was amazing :) really great XD loved it XD

and it all makes sence at the end liek a good book/ story should. really nice work :)