Fate Is Insanity. - Comments

And I just realized I made almost exactly the same comment two updates in a row...

I always love the way you end chapters. Perfect line to end it on. And how you described her band tee, "annoying and endearing". I just love how you let us see right in his head.

Damn, that was such an awesome line! Fucking drunk drivers... great chapter. It really was great, but I think I liked the preceding ones better, but only because there was more internal debate going on there (I love that kind of stuff, just seeing in a character's head).

Man, this is terrific! Definitely one of the better stories here on Mibba.

"And then I think I fell into something like love."
I love that line.
*subscribes*

A gasp? I love how specifically you take us through his thought process. It's not so specific that it's boring, but it's specific that you can just jump right in to his head.

Doofus... ask what her name is! Now I'm left wondering what kind of guy ishe? I'm so happy you updated! It's like... Christmas or something! I loved the description of how she's beautiful. I think that's one of the specialest forms of beauty... when it peaks through. When it's always there, just maybe a little hidden or disguised.

I swear to god I heard that iron angel fall as I read this... Your writing never ceases to amaze me.
"The single car’s headlights cut her in half, sending her shadow running, long and narrow in front of her."
You had me at the first sentence. I'd love it (and subscribe) if you decided to continue, but if you don't, it's a beautiful one-shot.