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  • teenage dirtbag

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    It was a little repetitvive, and you need to seperate your text into paragraphs,
    but other than that, it was completely original, I've never read anything like it.
    It was imaginative but still realistic.
    It was sad, but somehow you just get the feeling that She is going to be okay.
    August 7th, 2009 at 06:37am
  • Constant Dreamer

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    Thank you so much :)
    August 1st, 2009 at 07:04am
  • i defy you stars.

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    I really liked this, the imagery was very nice and it was really sad.
    You're a really good writer.

    I will say that the text was really blocked together and difficult to read so it's best to separate your text into paragraphs.

    But yeah, I really liked this, keep it up.
    July 31st, 2009 at 12:43pm
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