Awww that was amazing I loved it. But it had me almost crying. I loved how each little part of the tattoo was to remember something different about her.
August 4th, 2009 at 11:05pm
Review;
Firstly, I applaud you on how well you took your scenario and used it; this was extremely original, and not the usual guy gets tattooed by girl and falls in love with her.
Secondly, the memories made me smile! I specifically loved the one when the swallow was mentioned.
Thirdly, the tattoo was awesome, as I said before I loved the memory of Olivia saying how she'd be a swallow. It was incredibly sweet for Brian to be getting that tattooed on him!
Overall your grammer was to perfection, your storyline was brilliant and I generally just loved it. Well done, this is definately one of my favourite entries!
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