It's reall good but is ver similar to a few other arraged marriage stories. I love the way you've written it but it feels a bit rushed. Things don't seem to naturally fall into place. I really like how the characters connect so well with each other. I'm hoping that you go through and edit it when you have free time. The are a few spelling mistakes and a number of grammar. You reall are a good writer. Keep up good work
First time reader and I'm loving it! I don't know if it's just me but i love storie's about arranged marriage's mainly this one! brava and keep updating. :]
Please update soon!! im soo hooked in the story n love it i wanna see who she ends up with i have no clue if i want her with ricky or jack but i think either is good :)
Anway, for anyone who even reads the comments. If you haven't noticed, I haven't updated in awhile. This is due to my computer cord exploding. I'm trying my hardest to get another one. If things pan out spectactularly, I might get one this Friday. I woulda updated on my iPod, but the next few chapters are already written out on my laptop. :( I promise um trying my best. Will let you know of anything changes.