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Mat Devine (250)

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I liked this. It was really sweet.
What I think you need to do is space your writing a bit more. So that it is easier to read. :)

May 28th, 2010 at 05:26pm
Sundance Kid. (100)

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I like it so far.
All I have to suggest is maybe get a more readable layout and check grammar/use of right word.
Other than that it was amazing :D

May 6th, 2010 at 10:32pm

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