I'm like really in love with this already. I love your descriptions and how you showed her feelings. And I luuuuhhhhvvvvveee Garrett. (: haha Excited for next update.
I'm gonna do an encore on what Melanie did in her spazzy comment. SHE CAME BACK FOR GARRETT! SHE CAME BACK FOR GARRETT! SHE CAME BACK FOR GARRETT HOT STUFF NICKELSEN SO THEN THEY CAN BE ALL CUTE AND MACK NON-STOP AND THEN MELANIE AND I WILL BE SOOOO HAPPY! : D
I absolutely love this. I love the way you depicted their feelings and you get a realistic sense to it. Even though it's the first chapter, I find Garrett unbelievably cute already since he went after her when she tried to run off. This is going to be amazing, I can already tell. (: Awesome job Kirsten. LOVE YOU! <33
I love her in this. I love him in this. I love them in this. I really like her character. You can tell that she's trying to be strong and stay by her [stupid] decision to EVER LEAVE HIM, but at the same time she's sooooooooooo still lovin' him and wanting to basically forget whatever got between them and mack 'im senseless. Or, y'know...maybe, more realistically, she just still loves him and will always have that soft-spot for him..but whatever. That doesn't sound as cool. THIS IS FREAKING RAD. I'M SO EXCITED FOR THE NEXT PART. DEFINITELY WRITE IT AND POST IT SOON. I'll bribe you. I will. I'll even (and this is too likely) probably tell you secrets about my NEW GARRETT STORY if you'll update this more. Oh yeah. I'm full out bribing here, Kirsten. TAKE THE BAAAAAIIIITTTTTTTT. <3 love you.
SHE CAME BACK FOR GARRETT. SHE CAME BACK FOR GARRETT. LILIANA RAE CAME BACK FOR GARRETT NICKELSON. BECAUSE SHE LOVES HIM. AND HE LOVES HER. AND MELANIE WANTS THEM TO MACK. AND KIRSTEN WILL SO DO WHAT MELANIE WANTS AND LET THEM MACK AND NOT COCKBLOCK THEM LIKE MELANIE DOES TO ALL HER CHARACTERSSSSSSSS.... (because Kirsten loves Melanie, whether or not she'll admit it or nottttttttt) AND, LILIANA CAME BACK FOR GARRETT. SO THEY CAN MACK. AND THEN GET HITCHED. AND THEN LIVE HAPPILY EVER AFTER. SO THAT MELANIE WILL BE HAPPY.