October 3rd, 2010 at 05:24pm
So Wrong, It's Right. - Comments
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That was really cute! :)April 24th, 2010 at 06:11am
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The ending made me laugh!January 29th, 2010 at 04:35pm
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I'd rather not die, thanks :O
I enjoyed the ending thoroughly, btw :]October 8th, 2009 at 05:40pm -
I'm commenting cuz you said if i didnt then i was going to die. I dont wish to die right now. Ha jk actually it was very good.September 12th, 2009 at 09:19pm
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This was a nice short story. But, to begin with I'd like to say that putting links to images of clothes and characters isn't allowed on Mibba, or in the contest. Because of the lack of character description (I didn't click to see the images) I didn't get an image of the characters at all, and that's not good.
The story started off nicely, with Lexie instantly being into her teacher, but I think it went a bit fast from there. It just didn't seem that realistic to me, and realism is a very important thing in this contest, considering the subject.
Thanks for entering (:September 3rd, 2009 at 08:47pm -
OMG!!! thats like- the exact same shit i say to my girlfriend lmao!! i loved it doll! was amazingSeptember 3rd, 2009 at 04:46am
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I love the tattoo, because my friend has the same thing on her shoulder. Her parents also don't know about it :tehe:August 31st, 2009 at 03:17am
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This was cute, and the ending made me laugh. I loved itAugust 16th, 2009 at 03:47am
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I love it! It's so cute!
The ending made me laugh.August 4th, 2009 at 09:13pm -
cuuuuuuuuuuuuuuute
hahaha
btw, i looooooooooooved that story layout;
it was so pretty! hahaAugust 4th, 2009 at 05:50am -
Wow. I really liked it. It was sexy.
And I agree. More please.
=pAugust 3rd, 2009 at 11:02pm -
OH MAN I COULDN'T STOP LAUGHING AT THE END TEARS CAME RUNNING DOWN LMAO XD AND I STRONGLY AGREE YOU SHOULD DO MORE! =DAugust 3rd, 2009 at 03:01am
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that was so good!! You should do more :)August 1st, 2009 at 01:24am
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I really like this! (: The ending made me laugh. x) Good job. ^-^August 1st, 2009 at 01:21am
It was a bit quick, sadly, and I miss some sort of a character description.
But other than that it was a nice read, and the ending made me laugh. ((: