Nothing Goes As Orchestrated - Comments

Another great chapter.
I bloody love this story!!
Brilliant.
So happy Chelley has left and now I think it's Cassie & Alex's time.
<3

i loved this chapter
the playstation thing was genius

Haha omg Chelley's such a bitch for throwing a remote at Alex's FACE! But the PS2 made things funnier lol... That's gotta hurt though.. I'm crying right now at how sweet Cassie's being to Alex :) love this!

xo

the PS2 thing made me laugh.
FINALLY. They broke up. woooooo Hoooooo!!!

for some reason, the playstation worked out better.
haha.
good job.

At least he's stopped stringing Chelley along. However, he didn't seem to be the one to bring it up :/ If she hadn't, would he have? I'd like to think so. At least he was honest that he still loved Cassie in the end. yay :)

Happy Cassie/Alex moment. Cute :) And throwing objects? awesome.

Awwwh,
That made me really really happy.
Now, Alex, go home, dump that one chick, and be with Cassandra. kthnx. :]

Awe.
:D
~Chelsea~

OH GOSH!
That was soo sweet.
and everything
Alex can be a real gentlemen when he trys.
and. . GOSH.. so close..but yet so far. XD
I wnat them to make a BABY.
A gorgeous baby. XD

Aww. That was cute, and I LOVE that you used that FYS song. It's my favorite by them.

update soon!

OH FINALLY CASSIE.
this made me so freaking happy, i think i actually cried a tear (':

Awwwwweeee that was absolutely THE sweetest chapter ever :) Alex is so awesome... <3

xo

The end made me really sad for some reason. I'm not being sarcastic about it either. I really don't know why I'm sad. I should be cheering for Cassie for making the right decision (for once?) and not letting it go further. But I'm still sad. :/ I kinda wanna know what was running through Alex's head. He's the one who brought the baby thing up. I wanna know his expression after she just wants to cuddle. Did he just wanna get laid? or was he actually serious and maybe Cassie is just thinking about how he has a girlfriend and imposed that onto how she read his expression?

I feel sad :(

I'm a bad subscriber, I never comment. Sorry.
I do love this story though and I love the plot. Can't wait for more.

i don't know how she held out as long as she did. he is completely irresistable.

Oh, fuck. You scared me with the "Do you want to make a baby?" part, but thankfully they didn't, because some shit would have went down.

wow
i loved it
the finally said the L word
and she was the one to say it first
i am so proud of her
i cant wait to see what happens when the get home
cause things cant stay this way for long
iit made me smile at the end when she said "just hold me"
it was so sweet but you could tell that her heart was hurting when she said it
i fall in love with this story more with each chapter
keep up the good work

update soonn :}

poor cassie
i feel really bad for her
even though she brought this on herself
i cant wait to see what you have planned for the next chapter