The Lemon Diary - Comments

I picked this story to review just from the short description, because it seemed snappy and tart, if that was the intention. The introduction, although short and a little squinty for my tastes, doesn't disappoint. I'm a bit confused about the Las Vegas puzzle metaphor, but otherwise it all clicks together nicely.

The rest of the chapters flow along much as I would expect, without anything glaring to disrupt your pace- it seems polished, I guess is what I'm trying to say.

If lemons are duds, then this isn't one at all.

I want to barf a little. I think you know what the name Shawn means to me. I like the story though.

You did it again!

I like how you gave Shawn's perspective on this too, just because I know what you're referring to.

Aha. Life story. XD

How come I never found out you updated this?

Yayy! The first chapter is adorable. (:

Hello. I'm not trying to rush you and this may sound completely stupid since this story hasn't been updated since July. I do not mean to come across as rude. I'm just worried that you won't update this story, because it has the potential to become the best story that I've ever read.

The preface sounds so interesting. I want more. Now.

Breezy;:

I. Love. This. Layout.

A lot.

*backs slowly out of comments page to read story*

^^ Thank you! I do too.

I took a picture from dA that said just "The Lemon" and I decided to take it into paint and add in "DIARY." I reeeeaaallly like it too. But my other layout is also really pretty. You should tell me which one you like.

I. Cannot. Wait. For. More.

o.o

I. Love. This. Layout.

A lot.

*backs slowly out of comments page to read story*

cynical_dreamer:

this sounds like its going to be a great story! hope to read more soon! :D

I hope I have the motivation to write more soon! I don't know when the next chapter will be posted. =/

this sounds like its going to be a great story! hope to read more soon! :D

HypocriticalNonsense:

I already love this story and the first chapter hasn't even been posted.
Lmfao.

(:

That's a very nice thing to say. ^^ It always motivates me lots when I hear stuff like this from my readers. Thank you. =)

I already love this story and the first chapter hasn't even been posted.
Lmfao.

(: