The Black Signature - Comments

okay, i was stuck on a damn boat for five days so i didnt get to read it till just now but i love this. i love the little controversey with leon and rune. it amuses me. lol.

i'm in love with this story!
its so well written! :D

awwwwwwwwwww
my Leon got hit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
:O
though i do love rune
rofl
hmmm...still very curious about the whole cotton thing.
and omfg...i feel so freakin stupid!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
football....rofl
whewt....i thought it was strange Leon was good at what...we Americans call football. rofl. when u said goals, and Leon like dropped the ball..i realized. its like Spanish futbol and futbol americano. our soccer is your football. damn i feel stupid. but ouch several times in the chapter i was like owwww, must have hurt.

hmmm the whistle....im guessing Kiara......or some new character....that be interesting.

once again descriptiveness is very vivid, and real.
lets update again, shall we?
so yeah....update again.....like er...how about....ermm now?
rofl
enjoyed, continue, loved it!!!!!!!!!!!
-Chrissy

awww good, long chapter. once again very descriptive Fey!!! I really did like it. well now ryan needs to update!!!!!!!!! im still very curious about the title, and what happened to her. I like love leon and damien......ROFL
so perverted liek my friends and me. rofl
pleaseeeeeee updateee!!!!!!!!!!!
-Chrissy<3

P.S. Only one mistake. After the coffee burn, when he's going to eat his cheese on toast. wrong POV. You must've copied, but need to change that!!!!!!

awwwwww i wove itttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I wove Leon!!!!!!!!!!!!
Well seeing, I like love you, and your like Leon....makes sense!!!!!
haha
You both have a very good style of writing!!!!!!!!!!! I know when some people write like that one is way more superior then the other. Like there's a huge margin in between the writing styles!!!! But this fits nicely!!!!!!!

I do happen to like Leon's more, but maybe that's becuase I havn't read much of Kiera's point of view. I'm so wanting to read the football tryouts. so he likes english and football. im guessing Rune does to..
oh i wanna know why he got so pissed off, becuase leon didn't like the english teacher. ugh i keep forgetting his name Connor or something. w.e doesn't matter
well please update!!!!!
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this is greattt.

yall should keep writing, i think its amazing. ^^

Pretty awesome man :)