Home Alone - Comments

*Gasps* No sex? 0.0
.. Thats okay.
I like the plot.
They'll still kiss.. right? right?

I know how Frankie feels.
I really do xD

Hm, hope they figure something out.

oh and btw......THIS STORY IS AWESOMELY AMAZING!! =DD

Okay, I just have to take a second to thank all of you for your amazing comments. They really make me happy, which is sorta, really needed right now. :roll:

And, I want to apologize with all of my heart to those of you who use Internet Explorer. I use Mozilla Firefox, so the font looked completely different to me. Someone reported it, and I couldn't figure out why it was still un-readable, but I looked at it on Internet Explorer, and sure enough, it was practically impossible to read. So, again, I'm terribly sorry to those of you who couldn't read it, and thank you to who ever reported it, which gave me the idea to check what it looked like on IE.


- M

revengefulvampire:

Well, for me, it's nearly 1a.m and i'm thinking of going to sleep once this is posted...

Damn you Gerard, you're so...just...bipolar towards Frankie!
Hes does one thing, you don't like it, does another thing and you still don't like it!

Can't wait for the sequeal by the way, it seems awesome!

More soon please?

Yes I do now agree that Gee is sort of bipolar towards Frankie or maybe he is just confused because he may be having a "crush" on Frankie when really it could be much much more. I like the ending of the newest chapter simply because Frankie told his phone that it wasn't its fault and for some reason that seemed emotional to me...hmmm. I love this story and I hope and pray there is a sequel!! More please?

Well, for me, it's nearly 1a.m and i'm thinking of going to sleep once this is posted...

Damn you Gerard, you're so...just...bipolar towards Frankie!
Hes does one thing, you don't like it, does another thing and you still don't like it!

Can't wait for the sequeal by the way, it seems awesome!

More soon please?

I love your writing style.
And I'm dreaded the end of this story- please do a sequal?
Amazing update!

Miss Chaos.:

*dramatic gasp* D: i'm sorry for not commenting the last two chapters.
i didn't get an email or anything.. but i shall comment now! (:
sequealsequealsequeal! dooo ittt. i'll give you cookies and comments. :'D
awhh, i love that Gerard is opening up to Frankie.
and rofl @ billy/damion/the brat.
i know there won't be any sex in this story, but i do wonder when they'll kiss...
soon?! :'D

Well I'm very sorry you didn't get the emails. I wonder why that happens.. It's quite frustrating, really.
And ahh, the kiss.. That is for me to know, and you to find out. :file: :tehe:

HeartsXStars:

What?! Only three more chapters?! What am I going to do with my life after this is over?! :(

With the sex scene thing...they are really easy to write depending on what you are going for. Do you want the sex scene to be really long or short and to the point? It really depends :)

Great update by the way! I'm glad that Gerard opened up to Frank this shall lead to more sexiness. :)

So the first part of your comment kind of made me smile like this -> That means a lot, thank you so much. :arms:

The thing about the sex scene, is that, although I read a lot of it.. and I mean a lot , I've never had sex, much less gay sex, so I feel weird trying to write something I know nothing about. BUT, I'm gonna read some of the stuff on the thread about writing sex scenes, and start writing some practice ones to get used to it.

And between you and me.. and every one that reads this (), I've already started writing down ideas for the sequel, and I may have just finished writing the first chapter.. It shall be light and funny like Home Alone, but I'm going to throw in a big batch of awkwardness to go with it. :tehe: I'm sort of excited.

- M

Well, reading this put me off of the fact that i was cold and hungry so woo achievement!!!

AND Frankie and Gee make me laugh, they're so...random and you can tell Gee wants to be friends with Frankie but he doesn't want Frank to know.
Also i think there is attraction on both sides with them, like Frank subconsiously likes Gee and Gee knows that he likes Frankie...

More soon please?

Oh, yes, do a sequel, that would cool XD
And about the sex thing, It doesn't really matter... I'm not gonna say I don't read it but my liking to stories doesn't go around that...
I love this story anyway XD

*dramatic gasp* D: i'm sorry for not commenting the last two chapters.
i didn't get an email or anything.. but i shall comment now! (:
sequealsequealsequeal! dooo ittt. i'll give you cookies and comments. :'D
awhh, i love that Gerard is opening up to Frankie.
and rofl @ billy/damion/the brat.
i know there won't be any sex in this story, but i do wonder when they'll kiss...
soon?! :'D

What?! Only three more chapters?! What am I going to do with my life after this is over?! :(

With the sex scene thing...they are really easy to write depending on what you are going for. Do you want the sex scene to be really long or short and to the point? It really depends :)

Great update by the way! I'm glad that Gerard opened up to Frank this shall lead to more sexiness. :)

Mehehe i swear if you story was candy i would have eaten the whole thing by now. It would probably taste like Dirty clothes, door handles, and porn magazines, witch would be a little weird, but i would enjoy it just the same! ^-^ but yeah, that basically means I'm in love with your story and i can't wait for the next chapter. and yes there should be a sequall! so then i can keep reading the awesomeness ^-^

Awww frank is wearing something clean and gerard wasn't as big as a douche bag as he usually is! :)
There should totally be a sequeal!

YAy!!! ILUSHYOURSTORY!

*Sings* love is in the air!!! haha thought this one was pretty cute with frank stressing over how he looks :]

Gee you meany! Poor Frankie just wants to be your friend and yet when you make him think that youre friends you turn him away.

MEANY GEE!

More soon please?

Gerard likes frank! Gerard likes Frankkkk!!!<3

I like your humor : D

haha! i love the website that you put the link for! i never noticed half of the stuff that i read!!

So Long Gorgeous...:

Geez..
What crawled up Gerard's ass and died?
Good update! :)

Did you know you sneeze up to 100 miles an hour?

No way! Hah, that's crazy. It was so hard choosing which facts I was going to use in the chapter. There were some really, really good ones, but they just didn't really fit, or they were way too long. :roll: