The Letter - Comments

wow! this was really good!

Very deep. I understood the whole flipping around the time line thing. good job XD

That was very amazing.
Whoaa.
Powerful :\

Okay, to be brutally honest this story didn't go with the banner well at all. The other story you had up previously went way better with it, and it just worked you know? Technically, yes, I do see how you can link this story with the banner because of the quote, but it's pretty weak.

That being said, this story was amazing. I love that you started with Dillion, who wasn't even in the relationship. I thought that the plot made perfect sense, but I could have missed something :XD I also didn't think it got boring, and I loved the touch at the end where Lane remembers Seth's promise from 3rd grade.

Good job and good luck :cute:

I can't remember a time where I ever loved a one-shot more.

It was actually pretty good. It was really well written. I'm not sure how to say this..... I understood the relationship, I understood everything, it was really clear, and I feel like I felt Seth's and Lane's pain. It was really well done! Bravo!!!! :D

omg I loved it!