With Such Confusion Don't It Make You Wanna Scream? - Comments

This is really good! I like it. Very well-written. And I'm sure that Michael Jackson himself would be so proud of you. :)

this was gentle and kind and tender and sore all at the same time. it hurt to read because it was so eye-opening. it was a pleasure to read, too. i thought you were very selective in what you said and you didn't over articulate. keep up the fantastic writing.

thanks for entering!

This a fabulous one-shot. I love your characters, content, and description. It's beautiful.