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  • Umbrella Pwnage

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    WTF!?!?!?!?!?
    You did not just kill her!
    Why would you do that?!? Cry
    And it better be a sequel!
    One where somehow there was a mistake and they brought her back to life!
    *sobs*
    Oh yeah and there was a part where some guys came to get money from Gerard.
    What was that about.
    January 28th, 2008 at 01:39am
  • Julliet

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    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! You cant end it like that! pleaseeee write a sequel:):):) pretty please ?!
    January 26th, 2008 at 09:56pm
  • livid-caution

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    Oh no it's over!
    *begs for sequel*
    January 26th, 2008 at 08:46pm
  • Roxie009

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    omg i thought it was amazin but she shunt av died!! i fink u shud do a sequel though a one shot wud maybe be better! who was it who shot her?
    January 26th, 2008 at 03:15pm
  • im so very cool

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    y would u kill skylar off thts just stupid, and u skipped like a whole lot from when frank hand cuffed them together. wtf u dont just kill of a min character in the middle of the story. thts really not a good ending, you should put more thought into it!!

    sorry I really didn't like it at all!! :( :( :( :( :( :( !!!!!!

    No No No No
    January 26th, 2008 at 01:24pm
  • Rat Head

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    Noooo! Skyler! Awww........I'm gonna miss her....

    *chants* Sequel, sequel, sequel, sequel, sequel! Please? I really loved every second of this story, and some parts I got to enjoy twice as much since I went back and re-found it. This was really great, and I hope the sequel or one shot (whichever) does just as good as this one. And I'm sure it will be- post a chapter on this one when the sequel or one shot is up? Just so we'll know? Because I'm hooked on this, and I'm sure I'm not the only one.
    January 26th, 2008 at 05:24am
  • Mel Chyaa

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    was it her mom?
    January 26th, 2008 at 04:21am
  • Mel Chyaa

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    *cry* nuuu!!

    aww man...now I'm sad..
    January 26th, 2008 at 04:21am
  • Converse Addict

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    omg! poor gee! poor skyler!!! who was the owner of the gun?! own was it? who was it?
    January 26th, 2008 at 02:47am
  • Zomg !

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    Wow..That was an amazing ending. I really think you should do a sequal! This has been my all time favorite story. Ever. <3333
    January 26th, 2008 at 12:07am
  • Alice Verney

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    poor skylar and it be cool to know in a oneshot
    January 25th, 2008 at 10:23pm
  • GeeandBobrockmysocks

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    sequel! plz
    January 25th, 2008 at 09:17pm
  • GeeandBobrockmysocks

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    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO SHE CANT DIE!!!!
    January 25th, 2008 at 09:16pm
  • MJLS

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    god that was such a nice ending to your story, I read it over at ficwad but moved here when I found it =) I loved the ending, even though i was like "THE FUCK" for just a brief second, this is definately a story i'll be rereading sometimes, just for the fun of it. Its really realistic and rather well written, better than some other stories out there

    I'd love to see a sequel or a oneshot after this story =) but thats something you should decide, I'll be on the lookout ;-)
    January 25th, 2008 at 07:10pm
  • FrancyPansy

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    nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo *cries* you let her die.. *sobbs*
    omg that's so tragic but geenious but tragic and it comes all of a sudden!

    sooooo i wanna know who the killer is! and i want a sequel, a looooooooong one ^^ please!
    i loved your story and i am so sad it is over now =/ it was my fav story on here

    well i also wanna know how much time has passed bye from the first to this chappy ^^ cuz except for now you never mentioned any dates :)

    oh god this is so sad.. now i cant study anymore.. shit xd but i need too.. fucking exam! *siiiiighs*

    soo i will come back, as always ^^, and check if there are some updates ^^
    January 25th, 2008 at 07:10pm
  • FrancyPansy

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    ahahha frankie swalloed the key!!! sweet but stupid xd
    January 25th, 2008 at 06:42pm
  • Rat Head

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    Yay! An update! I'm the first to comment, I'm the first to comment on the new chapter!!!! Dance Oh yeah! I loved it....Frank is so silly!
    January 25th, 2008 at 05:26pm
  • Eyeliner stains

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    Wooo!! Puppies rock!!! ^_^
    Duncan is such a cute name! It makes me think of food....=/
    puppies totally do!!!
    January 25th, 2008 at 05:12pm
  • Eyeliner stains

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    Dr. Acula:
    Wah! Finally made it all the way through! Now, you just have to keep updating because I loved it so so so much and parts of it make me wanna cry and others make me wanna laugh!
    aw thank you!!
    January 25th, 2008 at 05:12pm
  • Eyeliner stains

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    GeeandBobrockmysocks:
    roflmaf that was so funny! poor mikey being treated like a dog when he was lil
    I can totally see it though!
    January 25th, 2008 at 05:11pm