September 22nd, 2007 at 09:49pm
and again it is me who leaves a comment! i feel like a stalker XD XD
"our target is bob" haha lmbo that was geenious. i could so picture this scene!
You Can Keep My Brother - Comments
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September 22nd, 2007 at 09:46pm
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*does a crazy dance* you came back! you really do like my story!!!!...*slaps the fangirl out of self*September 22nd, 2007 at 06:37pm
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you updated! yipee
and another great chappy :D
your way of writing is really good :P
*sits down and waits for another update*September 22nd, 2007 at 06:23pm -
i'm so glad you liked it! i was getting way too desperate for feedback so thank you sooo much! you rock!September 22nd, 2007 at 04:57pm
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Awesome story! honestly
i loved the yelling part! i got so mad at gerard too!
i think skyler's and mikey's friendship is amazing!
update soooooooooooooooooooon!September 22nd, 2007 at 07:49am -
I wonder if the real Ray is really that out of it when he's drunk...September 18th, 2007 at 11:08pm
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You're welcome:mrgreen: I love how Ray acts when he's drunk. It's pretty funny.September 18th, 2007 at 09:53am
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well, thank you...i'm glad you like itSeptember 14th, 2007 at 08:34pm
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This is actually a pretty good story. I'm a little surprised. I thought I'd have to flame the stupid people again...[/random]
You've only got a few grammatical errors in it, but it's great otherwise. I'm subscribing for sure.August 22nd, 2007 at 12:28pm
thank you so much for the comment! it's really important for me to know people think it's realistic enough they can see it!