william this is awesome. Its one of those you want to keep reading because you really want to know what is going to happen next!!! That Latin is pretty close to the English translation. Though I think "per" means "for" but I could be wrong. I dont have a Latin. Dictionary right now LOL
But its good, and can't wait for more, seems to me you have worked hard to make it so good. Yay!!!
i love it and can't wait to read more!
please keep writing and update soon!